Well done Yasmin. Your ability to include detailed and relevant examples is very good. You also attempt to include some criticisms of the genre (Rosenau) as well as demonstrating a wider knowledge of the area of media.
In your conclusion some sense of the 'future' is needed (as in what is the future for PoMo media) as this is what the exam board expect to see.
Your introduction is excellent and demonstrates a clear understanding of the background to PoMo.
To improve you could have included the debate that as everything is a remix that it is hard not to consider nearly all texts as postmodern.
I would award this essay between 40 and 43/50 (B+)
Well done Yasmin. Your ability to include detailed and relevant examples is very good. You also attempt to include some criticisms of the genre (Rosenau) as well as demonstrating a wider knowledge of the area of media.
ReplyDeleteIn your conclusion some sense of the 'future' is needed (as in what is the future for PoMo media) as this is what the exam board expect to see.
Your introduction is excellent and demonstrates a clear understanding of the background to PoMo.
To improve you could have included the debate that as everything is a remix that it is hard not to consider nearly all texts as postmodern.
I would award this essay between 40 and 43/50 (B+)