An excellent introduction which clearly shows your understanding.
You will need to move onto girl talk far quicker in the exam as those texts created within the last 5 years carry the most marks. You manage to do this when moving between Saving Private Ryan and Inglorious so just make sure you do this with music too. Your points about IB are excellent and very clearly argued and debated. You would benefit from a few more 'pomo' words in this section. Your ability to connect Tarrantino films is excellent and it is pleasing to see how you have included work from Easter so seamlessly into your work.
Rather than using phrased like 'whats the point of that?' why not use terms like grandnarrative and debate how the texts question their own purpose.
Your conclusion is much better than the essay above as you include some reference to the future.
An excellent introduction which clearly shows your understanding.
ReplyDeleteYou will need to move onto girl talk far quicker in the exam as those texts created within the last 5 years carry the most marks. You manage to do this when moving between Saving Private Ryan and Inglorious so just make sure you do this with music too. Your points about IB are excellent and very clearly argued and debated. You would benefit from a few more 'pomo' words in this section. Your ability to connect Tarrantino films is excellent and it is pleasing to see how you have included work from Easter so seamlessly into your work.
Rather than using phrased like 'whats the point of that?' why not use terms like grandnarrative and debate how the texts question their own purpose.
Your conclusion is much better than the essay above as you include some reference to the future.
Well done Yasmin.
I would place this essay between 43 and 45. (A)